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--- terror-of-time [2022-04-24 21:18] – Addition of Luunai name, fixing Zalaagra's pronouns, fixing author pronouns because while ve used to go by 'she' it just reads weird now pinkgothic
+++ terror-of-time [2022-08-06 23:20] – Clarified a detail pinkgothic
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-When the author of //[[:A Thread Between The Stars]]// was around ten years old, ve started writing books in the kraiaKy universe in a series v ecalled //Terror of Time//. This universe was much more of a patchwork of ideas back when ve first made it, and it took until 2015 (when ve was thirty) for ver to seriously attempt reconstructing it.
+When the author of //[[:A Thread Between The Stars]]// was around ten years old, ve started writing books in the kraiaKy universe in a series ve called //Terror of Time//. This universe was much more of a patchwork of ideas back when ve first made it, and it took until 2015 (when ve was thirty) for ver to seriously attempt reconstructing it.
 This page exists less as a means to chronicle the stories of //Terror of Time// as it does to detail the changes made to the setting over the course of its radical reimagining.
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 ==== kavkema ====
-In the original books, the [[:kavkem|kavkema]] were known as **Deinodons** and were a faction, not a species. They loosely encompassed all carnivorous species of dinosaurs (in disregard for the era they might have lived in), although some carnivores weren't allied with the Deinodons.
+In the original books, the [[:kavkem|kavkema]] were known as **Deinodons** and were a faction, not a species. They loosely encompassed all carnivorous species of dinosaurs (in disregard for the era they might have lived in), although some individual carnivore characters weren't allied with the Deinodons.
 With a heavy heart, the author has settled on a single sapient species of carnivorous dinosaurs, knowing this to be sorely necessary for plausibility. While Evenatra could have uplifted many more carnivores to sapience, there was no reason at all for her to do so.